Age/Gender: 20, Male
Location: Maleny, Australia
Job: Machine Operator
There is something waiting for me in the darkest part of my imagination.
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The censored edition is the best!
~Night-Ranger
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I reviewed the other version of this game also,
You obviously didn't take my advice about the "You lose" when the ball stops.
It needs to say something like "Try again?", well just think about it, you can't really win this game.
Also you need a back to menu button in gameplay, or when the ball stops.
Once you choice one mode you can't try the other without restarting the whole flash manually. Definitely needs fixing.
~Night-Ranger
Author's Response:
There are a few things that need tweaking your right...
I will get onto them
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I can watch this ovah and ovah!
I remember you showing us this at school ages ago!
Good work for putting it on NG.
~Night-Ranger
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This is a pretty good idea.
But please, put a preloader on it.
And maybe next time make the light a little more clear on the cards. It was a bit glary.
~Night-Ranger
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The humour in this could have been good if you could draw a proper penis.
It was mangled at the end and I look for such detail. ;)
~Night-Ranger
Author's Response:
I will have to draw bigger dix next time :3
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This is a great little first flash.
The drawings were good, the sound was descent and there wasn't anything to n00bie about it.
Keep up the good work!
~Night-Ranger
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This is fun.
One thing though, if you keep jumping to the right a blue bird will continuously be there for you to land on. So you can just keep jumping and your score just keeps going +10 +10. This definitly needs to be fixed.
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Sensei. It is spelled SENSEI!
Yes I am black belt in karate.
I am a senior: Senpai.
The teacher is Sensei.
Now to comment on your flash:
I think the introduction was very effective. The camera was good.
But after the !W! thing... Really it wasn't very impressive. It looked like a rushed job, please put more effort into it. Add voices instead of text and scrub up on the graphics.
Good luck!
~Night-Ranger
Author's Response:
sasa
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What are you testing?
Why do you need to post it on NG if it is just a test?
Are your intentions to waste peoples time?
~Night-Ranger
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Please finish it.
It is not the best idea to have unfinished work here.
People will frown upon it.
~Night-Ranger
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